You didn’t exist,
You merely existed.
You walked in,
You remained.
You walked out,
You still remain.
You may not exist,
Yet would continue to stay within me.
You didn’t exist,
You merely existed.
You walked in,
You remained.
You walked out,
You still remain.
You may not exist,
Yet would continue to stay within me.
Loving this one ✨✨✨
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🙂 👼
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Beautiful words of lost love. A love that one still keeps within even when the loved one is gone
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Thank you El, I believe reality dressed in poem turns out to be beautiful on the outside and hurt yet on the path of humbler and learned on the inside
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that’s so true. We sometimes don’t even understand how somebody can enjoy the words we wrote when we were hurting while we wrote them and it was so painful to let them flow out of or bleeding heart
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I agree with you but that’s another beauty of writers if I may call myself that I am still learning to write better, our hurt also is majestic and so is happiness. So I guess what makes me glad is hurting or not writing helps the writer take the load off and reader the pleasure. I could make some move and that brings a little smile which is good enough over crying alone for hours 🙂
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On that I also agree with you..writing helps you take the load off and gives pleasure to the reader. And yes, better make some move that brings a little smile which is good enough over crying alone for hours 😀
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🙂 I can feel what you are saying El, I too love laughing and smiling somehow my heart isn’t ready yet I suppose. But the day it will be I’ll be back to smiling most of the times. You do make me smile though I must say. Much gratitude
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Oh, dear, I’m so glad I can make you mile. I wish I could always make you smile. BTW, you wrote a long comment yesterday as an insightful reply to me a and I gave you the answer last night,ut I have lost now both your commet and my reply. I really don’t know what happened
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Hi El, of course you make me smile and it’s nice to know you feel glad about it 🙂 I removed it from the comments as I was under an impression you might have read it. Sorry.
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Oh that’s ok. It’s a fine move you did, indeed, as I had already read your comment. I was just worried I did something wrong and my reply was lost and didn’t get to you, fearing you never read it. I’m glad you did, as they were too long texts about personal impressions which had not so much interest for anybody else 😉
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But maybe they are beautiful for other people because they can relate to that and feel we human beings have such a beautiful thing in common, a true noble feeling called love able to bring out the best of us
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I just about wrote almost similar to what you expressed here. This is called connection and this is how miles apart strangers become knowers 🙂
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Yes, I believe in that kind of connection, people with similar souls that even being miles apart can feel the same or undesrtand things the same way
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🤗😊 I glad to have connected with you
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Me too! 🙂
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☺
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Time for me to head for bed. Wish you a fantastic evening.
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Same here I too would be going off to sleep. Have to get 8 hours of sleep and then back to work. Depression is a disease filthy rich could afford. For pain or no pain we would still have to show up to work and earn the living. That’s called blessing in disguise
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Hahaha, you’re right, only filthy rich could afford depression and stay all day long in bed, 😀 … so, good night, dear friend
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Good night dear. I had seen this thing SD about depression and rich people comment in a movie’P.S. I love you ‘ I love that movie. I can talk all day now 😀 we must sleep . Gn dear sweet dreams thank you for keeping me company
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Thanks to you, for being up here for me late at Night… And again for your recommendation, i haven’t seen that movie. I’ll try to find it and watch it 💜
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Thanks, very kind of you to say that, but you also accompained me and I feel gratutide as well for what you did. I’ll check that movie, I guess I’d like it since I’m curious regarding the title which is coincident with one of the Beatles primitive songs that I like so much. It must be good if it is a Gerard Butler movie
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🙂 it’s a pleasure El, sorry couldn’t reply last night was a little caught up with something. I hope you like the movie I like it how you relate things like you did with the Beatles song 🙂 I do that kind of a thing too. I believe in signs and sometimes relative things get me to play with my intuition and more often than not I get to the right thing
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You’re such a smart person, as thougtful as you always are, even to reply the simplest comment I could make. So the reason why it takes so long for you to get better, as I guess you need to know all the answers and it takes a lot to find out all of them or even sometimes come to figure out there’s no answer at all. But I bet you’ll be able to help yourself and all your trials soon be over. Yeah, I know, you’ll be able to get over things pretty sooon
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El, oh my for someone not knowing me as well, to be able to come up with that. You’ve taken me by surprise. It’s almost bang on. I just don’t feel I should take as much time for the answers were given before the questions could have been asked. I feel so pathetic about myself sometimes. I know though my heart was never set out to do something pathetic. It’s hurting too bad. But guess what I’ve been through worse in this crazy thing called love. Like Richard gere in pretty woman says I am gifted with impossible relationships 🙂 I know though El if I could get over past hardships which I am most certain more cruel, impossible, neverending pain, and irreparable, but I survived. So I m sure this too will pass. But if you ask me to just be a simple damsel in distress I would love for once to be the delicate hurt girl who can cry n b weak n ask for support and shoulder over the intelegent experienced learned miss know it all
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No matter how hard we try to forget, memories can’t be erased. Stay strong! 💪🏻
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Thank you dear. I can understand where you are coming from and yes I would like to get back to being strong
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